Mortal Angels: Destiny Revealed

Here's a sneak peek at my notebook and notes for my novel Mortal Angels Destiny Revealed. I plan on making this a long series so I am putting a lot of effort into making this as good as Harry Potter, LOTR, and other famous novels with fandoms. I am open to constructive criticism and any advice people have to give me.

I am a furry otaku. I have very many different fursonas. I like many different anime, mostly from early 90s to early 00s. I am veey friendly and 420 friendly. :3 Feel free to find out more.
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