The Broken Pieces of Our Hearts going on a temporary Hiatus? !!!

Okay guys I realized there's a lot of flaws with the story that I need to fix . I had someone review my story and I got a score of 50/100. She said my plot line is good but the way I write and my grammar mistakes make the story very unreadable. She also said that my main character's relationships seems a bit rushed with her condition that she supposed to have. I realized that I was focusing on Sarang is better but I guess I made it like she didn't have it at all. I'm going fix the story a bit and get a beta-reader to help with my grammar faults. The story wont be completely changed but it's going be a few changes in some of the situations. Thank you to all of the people who read and enjoy my story and sorry if .y story was a bit off and not that understandable but I promise I'll bring back a better story by probably a few weeks from now.

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